wow mike!!!! I think you've got it!!! love the scrappy pen like outlines round the rainbows, great idea! also the composition and elements although such a contrast you've managed to get them to fit together pleasently. Also filling the gaps with that splatter texture helps take your eye off the negative space so you can still leave the gap for a good composition.
hah.
Woooonderful stuff you have got
Im very impressed Mike!! such an improvement!
+FAV!
nicely composed
nice colors too
just wish the bg wasnt so flat/plain in color
good work